2.-My dream is to become a model but I´m to short.
3.- I´m in love :$
4.-I like to go to the beach at night to see the moon and the stars.
5.-I can make friends easy, im a person easy to trust in.
6.-I´m trying to do excersice but i get distracted and i cant finish it.
7.-I really really love to listen music.
8.-I lived near from Pto.Vallarta for 5 years.
9.-I like Animals very much.
10.-I dance and sing in my room.
11.-I like to read.
12.-I like to go to the cinema.
13.-I like big butts and I can not lie ♪
14.-I really really like to sleep ♥
Hi Sonia, it's good to see you started your blog. Let me give you a little feedback about your grammar.
ResponderEliminarFact 2. You say you want to be a model but you're to short. It is actually written "too".
Fact 5. Your second "im" is spelled incorrectly. It must be written in capital letter and must have an apostrophe: "I'm".
Fact 6. Exercise doesn't have a "c" after the "x": exercise. Also, "cant" is a contraction, therefore, an apostrophe is needed: "can't".
Fact 8. You can omit the preposition "from" before Puerto Vallarta: "I lived near Puerto Vallarta for 5 years".
Fact 9. "Animals" is a noun, but doesn't go in capital letter, it's just: "animals".
Fact 13. It`s not really suitable for a homework to quote such a song... even if it's a song... sorry... I don't want to be yelled at.